November 18, 2005

still …

Posted under: Poem @ 12:53 am

fooled
i might have been
by the thoughts
that kept probing
in my head
might have been
badly misled
by the dream
over a kiss
created
but this soul
of mine
pretty much knew
that it needed
a constant dose
of you,
addicted.
the right word
that is.
addicted
like to a dose
of novocaine
in my vein
i’d beg for
some more
of you

jeopardized
my state being
i might have

still …

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    andry :

    November 18, 2005 @ 3:37 am

    halah halah…

    ini yah, bahasa hatimu ?

    nana ..::the truth nothing but the truth my heart shall speak :mrgreen:

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    'ka :

    November 18, 2005 @ 5:17 am

    BEEH-YUHH-TEEHH-FHOOLL!!!

    nana ..::tengkiyuh :mrgreen:

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    the police :

    November 18, 2005 @ 7:58 am

    na, sudah minum obatnya? :D

    nana ..::in my vein, in my vein, yes it runs in my vein :D

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    Mistikus Cinta :

    November 18, 2005 @ 9:00 am

    poem ini kalo di translate ke dalam bahasa sansekerta terus di baca sambil nyalain menyan pasti lebih seru …

    jangan lupa kembang setaman
    apalagi suasana-nya remang-remang

    (suara ketawa kamu jangan aneh gitu donk, merinding bulu ketek gw nih ..)

    nana ..::ada yang mau nerjemahin ke bahasa sansekerta, eh atau bahasa middle earth aja yah? aduh mbayangin jadi liv tyler di lotr nih… hihihihi :mrgreen:

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    gita :

    November 18, 2005 @ 9:06 am

    *but this soul of mine pretty much knew that it needed
    a constant dose of you* me too ;)

    nana ..::loh ndak boleh git, he is my novocaine, not to share with anyone hihihihi… aw sapa itu yang kau rindukan jeng?

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    noldie :

    November 18, 2005 @ 10:33 am

    itoku nan jelita…

    PDA…jangan nginpi jadi liv tyler yah! itu kan madumu…*senyum2 nakal*

    ergh…bo…secara gw ngertinya cuma bhs batak, tolong itu poem di translate ke bhs batak ama nias!

    ergh, ntar siang translatenya harus udah jadi dan letakin di atas meja saya yah *belagu jadi bos*

    wakakakkakakakkakakakkakakakakkakaka

    nana ..::hayyah kalo sama ito mah bahasa hati aja ntar ditranslatenya *tendang liv tyler* alah mana ngaku-ngaku bos lagi huh :P
    hmmm bagus juga kali yak kalo diterjemahin pake bahasa batak, ayo terjemahin ito!

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    naga :

    November 18, 2005 @ 5:20 pm

    jadi ngakak baca komentarnya doeljoni…wakakakak…
    eh tnp bermaksud menghina karya mu loh!

    udah ada obat anti addicted??

    nana ..::loh kok diobati? jangan. i want to stay addicted :)

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